오픽도전기_국내여행

I love watching baseball games, and I'm a big fan of the LG Twins.

Since I live in Seoul, I usually go to Jamsil Baseball Stadium to watch baseball games

I had (always) wanted to watch an away game of the LG Twins, so I planned a trip to Busan with my husband.

Busan is one of the most passionate baseball cities in Korea.

 

The game started at 6:30 p.m., but I arrived in the morning.

Before the game, I took a double-decker tour bus and visited famous places in Busan.

After the tour, I stopped by a traditional market and tried some street food.

(I couldn't find those foods easily in Seoul, so it was a special experience.)

 

Finally, it was time for the game, and I went to Sajik Baseball Stadium.

The atmosphere was amazing, and the fans were very passionate.

The best part was that my team won on my first visit to Sajik Baseball Stadium.

It was one of the most memorable trips I've ever had.

 

- one of the ~ ~ 중 하나

- I have ever had → 현재 시점까지의 인생을 통틀어서 말하는것. 즉 현재완료

- 여행을 계획한 것보다 원정경기를 보고싶었던게 더 과거라서 과거완료.

- win-won 자동사 즉 목적어 필요 없음.

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나는 야구보는 것을 매우 좋아한다.

나는 엘지트윈스의 엄청난 팬이다.

서울에 살다보니 종종 잠실야구구장만 갔었다.

나는 예전부터 엘지트윈스의 원정경기를 보고싶었고, 남편과 함께 부산으로의 여행을 계획했다.

부산은 야구로 열정적인 도시 중 하나 이다.

 

경기는 오후 6시30분이지만 난 오전에 도착했다.

게임전에 난 2층투어버스를 타고 부산 유명한 곳들을 구경했다.

투어가 끝난후 난 전통시장에 들려서 길거리 음식들을 먹어보았다.

 

드디어 경기시작 시간이 되고, 난 사직구장에 갔다.

분위기는 엄청났고, 팬들도 열정적이었다.

가장 좋았던 점은 우리팀이 이겼다는 것이다.

 

Before revising

I went to Busan with my husband on a vacation.

Actually, I went to Busan to watch a baseball game.

Busan is famous for baseball.

It has a baseball team called the LotteGiants.

My favorite team is  the LG Twins, (which is) a baseball team based in Seoul.

So, I wanted to watch an away game between the LG Twins and the LotteGiants.

It was really fun. 

To see many famous places, I took a double-decker tourist bus.

It was my first time riding a duble-dekcer bus.

I was really excited.

Busan has many kinds of delicious food, and beautiful scenery.

I had a great time in Busan.

 

- for my vacation이 안되는이유는 '내 휴가를 이용해서' 라는 느낌이 조금 더 강함

- 사람이 신났으면 excited, 사물이 신나게 만들었으면 exicting